Van-pl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wojak]

Fucking great

or in your mother tounge : Wyjebane w kosmos. Myslalem ze jebne :P.

Nice, but you need to work up your style more, than just ass of the dragon. Nice for start, I'm looking foward to see your next movies :)

Neonik responds:

Dzieki :)

Thanks a lot! I think I will make series of this, and maybe change style as you are suggesting.

Thanks again!

[Starlight Part 1]

Waste of time and web space

Dude, ever heard of audio compression?

Where is the plot of this movie? Where's the story?

Where are your talents shown? In stick sword?

Whatever. You should redone and resubmit it, and put any effort in your work..
1/5

RedBoxPariah responds:

Thanks i appreciate your comments! I've actually been studying how to draw stick swords for some time now and i feel that i have mastered it. Sorry you didn't find any evidence of a plot, but i didn't think you always needed one. Sorry aswell with the audio... i haven't quite figured out the whole compression thing yet... I won't be redoing it but i will put a more considerate amount of effort in the second part and will try to make up some sort of storyline... Once again thanks for your review! Even the seemingly 'negative' ones help me to learn!

["Winter"]

Kewl

Really cool interpretation of holidays. I admit your directing and animating skills, everything was really smooth and ploted. Plot with christmas bum is quite popular, but you polished it into something really nice.

Music is one of the best on NG, it's psychadelics is only compared to Salad Fingers.

My favourite 5/5 ;)

Keep up the great artistic work and ideas.

[Madness: Deus Ex Machina]

Awesome

It was really awesome, I can't even imagine how much time it cost you to make it, but it definetly was worth it. :)

Audio is fitting perfectly, also using rasters was a cool idea, the movie is very stylish beacuse of that.

Cock joke was the best of all cock jokes in all madness movies. 5/5

[Honey Smack HD]

Kinda true

But if you wish so, you could find hooks on every Kids-related stuff, that could be taken as abusive.

Nice work anywhay, but quite pathetic. There wasn't bigger flaws in graphics, since you have chosen to simplify the characters design. Voice acting was also decent.

Lookin' foward to see your next flashes, theyr'e nice, but would be better if less rude. 3/5

TXMStudios responds:

You make a valid point and we did think of other childhood cartoons we could tear apart, but besides He-Man, Winnie the Pooh stood out as one of the most devious. Pathetic is a pretty strong word, but we'll accept it. The next one shouldn't be as rude, more worship based.

[Aladdin 3150]

Really breathtaking

Your work is truly amazing, whole idea, drawings, simple little details in background, and suitable music made it an awesome movie. I don't remember a single movie, wich could hold 4.60 score for such long. You've counquered the top of NG. :)

But you made some flaws, such as too much blur. It slowed down in few moments, even on my pc, so try some tricks next time to keep up to the music.
Also it would be great if I could pause for a second in-movie, so try to make that panel. :)

5/5 10/10 keep up the awesome work.

[World of tourture]

Awful :(

Dude that was fcking awful.. 1st: think of an interesting story, 2nd: put some effort into drawings, or better, learn to draw first, 3rd: If you want to make a continuation as crappy as this one, better go to sleep.
Seriously, if your need to show your "art" to whole world, firstly ask someone friendly to you.
Newgrounds has a tons of various flash, but there is no place here for total poo.

[Bernard Desmond Episode 1]

Nothing new

You took concept from salad fingers, but it didn't had a point at all, and the size is definetly too large... Try compressing music and voice or not add bitmaps next time. I'm looking foward to full size version that make any sence. 2/5

[Lost Rhapsody 2]

Oh my... I'm still rotfling

Propably one of the most original submissions on the NG. Beginning was really stylish, later it beame worse and worse... cuz i couldn't take a breath. :D Sheeeit... I want third season to come out, beacuse someday you will laugh it out too. And many ppl will have another occasion to LTAO...

[Aoi House The Music Video]

Well done...

Maybie i'm too grown up to take a little drop of enjoyment from this, or maybie my brain couldn't stand that much of pop-sweeness. It's not like i only like metal, hamsters were cute, but that movie is too excesive for big guys. You should rate it "ONLY FOR 12-". Sorry, you fucket it up too much.

Graphically it's broadband quality, i saw real anime, wich had worse graphics. Sound... Definetly not my type. Awfully sweet.

Sorry for being subjective.