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[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 03]

Essence of stupidness

You know? The proplem of this movie isn't that your work is too bad to deserve true critique, it's only stupidness of all of the pepole, who voted on you posititvely.

But nice try, unfortunately, that's passed though.

Tidy crap, ya know.
ONE/FIVE

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Gug

[Skeletal's cute adventure]

COOL

The coolest thing in this movie is that the clock is synched with PC clock lol.

smackhouse responds:

WOW CUL BEST DAY OF THIS THING LOL

[Doo Dah]

Duh

I got a stupid feeling, that you made just a pointless, random flash to use Fatboy Slim music in it.

Nothing really new, i don't see anything awesome in it.

Graphics were not bad, but nothing really eye-keeping. Not so stylish, just a stupid random dot. Sound is great, but wasted chance to make something really unstupid. Zero both for interactivity and humor, overall 4.

2/5, ill let it pass, but you should change title of it to "how to NOT make a flash with cool music in it"

In one word that was L A M E.

fireball-lock responds:

thats not constructive =S

[Ultimate Ninja Showdown 3]

Heh

Nice idea making it in 3d, but i thought no# 1 twin was actually a girl lol. :P

Fighting was a bit lame, but it's still good.

5/5

PureCarnage responds:

Yeah, I am going to be forced to put more effort into the fight scenes now that its on front page. #4 is on in developement, will try to work out the fight scenes with more detail. I actually finally have a technique that I didn't have for this episode which makes it a lot easier.

[Framed]

Your Fbf was poor...

I thought you're gonna be super shitty experimental author, so I could get an BLAM point.

It's waaay better, than my thoughts, but's still poor.
Random animation, classic, and somehow boring.
Ya got something good inside you, something that would let you continue your flash story of your life.

Didin't know why, but i voted 2.

Still... Good luck in the future! (at last i wrote something constructive)

Rubbertje responds:

Your constructive criticism was poor.

I thought you were going to be a super shitty experimental reviewer.

It's waaay better, than what I first thought, but it's still poor. Random arguments, classic, and somehow boring. You've got something good inside of you, something that would let you continue your reviewing story of your life.

I didn't know why, but I couldn't vote on your review. (Ahem, haha)

Still... Good luck in the future! (At last IIII wrote something constructive)


Hehe, just kidding.

[Teagirl]

oh man HAHAHAHA

-spoiler-

Nice comic-stylized movie. Good work. You got good sense of humor, and used well booom of Chuck Norris hahaha... And the tea.

I'm glad this wasn't another "super-fuckin-duckin-suckin-dick-putted-into-mouth-of-a-slu
tty-whore-and-stick".

5/5 OMG

keep your style, and don't make something like RAB 12432109
Theyre good, but your movie is stylish.

Good luck next time ;P

Wonchop responds:

I dunno what a RAB 12432109 is...

[Seven Fates Pt.2 (2006)]

YOu don't have too much talent

Train your ppl design, cuz it sux. And i think you don't too experienced in Flash. Not enough to use Flash 8. Start with Flash 5 or MX, as many ppl does.

1/5

thenbriansaid responds:

i love you too

[The Crysler 300C]

NICE, but where are your flash skills?

Only flash thing i saw there was preloader. Dude, submit it to other site, cuz here are flash skills, not in making of a movie in-game. Sorry...

zero fingers to you.

Ollie-Web responds:

Sorry no can do! Ever bit of flash I submit is crap!

[Kitty cute WTF?]

Uhhh...

Cute at start, but nof funny at all. Very experimental movie. You could make it better and eatable.

1 finger to you.

BlackKingX responds:

How did you know... It was experimental.. I was trying out a few techniques and junk..

[POD#1 * My Broken Wings *]

Werid

Uhh, dude. You work hard a lot to create static action. Few moves and that's all. You lost your chance to make this movie really awesome. Next time make thrilling heavy action and use as much frame-by-frame animation, as much can you make. Nice sound, werid eyes of characters. You got talent, but you need to give it the right form, cuz body of girl looked innatural.

I think, you should continue this series, but fix te bugs and try to add some action. For now, your flash is is worth three fingers from me.

Anyway, good luck next time!

Black-Crystal responds:

If i have a graphic tablet, i will do twice as much fbf...

I admit that the eyes and body is weird and odd but i am still improving on drawing all those.