Van-pl's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Game Tutorial 4 beginners]

Good

But you didn't tell how to make, that your ball would not go out the game screen. Also you made a bug with collision. You lost health when not hitting a enemy, just in his "square".

5/5

[Moonlight Website]

Mini sites does not come out very often...

... And this one is bugged. Making buttons is an easy thing. YOu screwed also that you gave dynamic texts to button, wich is not too nice.

I don't go (yet) to any infoclass, but i do things better in flash.

YOu need a lot of training.

anyway, gaved you 1/5.

I think it's pointless to let it stay on ng.

[-:Buttons Tutorial:- 2]

Oh God...

If i was noob, I wouldn't know a simple thing, that you want to show in your tut.

Make it eatable and get the f out this stupid 3D.

1/5.

BTW: I firstly watched your second work. You didn't fixed the worst bugs.

Your major problem is that you're making tuts whiout being so smart and pro in flash. Second prolbem is that you make tuts about hopeless problems.

And making tuts leave to Gamecubicle and Adam Phillips ;).

DragonFruit-Rock responds:

shut up. you have no material meaning in my life. you just make things seem worse. begone

[Feed Lindsay!]

LOOOL

Don't say you masturbate youself... Ah you suck! (to guy who said that in few reviews ago) Don't smoke, and collect some money to get some ho! Boy...

[Fire Kirby]

Funny though

I didn't suppose to see that good game as this. I made 17100 ft :D

3 fingers to you.

[Spriters Hangout Tutorial]

You read too much Flashkit

Too much copied acionscript. I don't belive that person with AS skills to make a volume bar could make this that bad. Oh dude... You had to woked well, but this work is worthless.

2 Fingers to you

And next time make larger hit area on Button, cuz you are making a bug that is usually maked by noobs. Read more Flashkit next time.

Ultralink responds:

Okey,I try put that in my mind.

[Ball Revamped 4]

Well done

Nice graphics, but a way too lot of details, my old comp 1ghz processor couldn't make it at final boss. This thing was definetly screwd up. Nice music, lot of powerups and maaany crazy ideas. Very good. I almost finished it. There was only 2 other games, who squeezed me in straight 2 hours. Sinjid and Ronin.

Five fingers to you.

Don't make part 5, cuz this will be boring. Make an RPG :P

[Whack Your PC]

Tom Winkler, maker of Simpsons

Another flash :P Liked your style, whole work are good. And i enjoyed reading Flash MX2004 Bible :P

Nice, and a long to see :P

[NG 1337 Translator!]

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:P

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[Snowball Fight!]

Cute and Well made

What more can i say? I give 5, cuz i liked it :) and i like cute manga girls too ]:->