Van-pl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zelda: UO Epis:6]

Character development is masterful, however..

however you need to work more much on the whole backgrounds and design, which are very poor.

You nicely built up an atmosphere, but drawings are too poor.. Like said before, you should buy a tablet :)

[We are the ONE.]

touching

And awesome too. But you also could referr to the current situation in Tibet. Many pepole needs your animation to understand what is going on.

I very liked collage of diffrent animating and motion styles in your movie.

5/5
Keep up the great work!

[~SnowSnowForLucyTrailer~]

Niice

Nice animation, its smothiness and cuteness. All in your animation and drawings is great. Also i see, that you're making it into a full movie, widescreen, dvd et cetera.

Great work on the audio, it's so juicy and nice, it's rare for flashes to have audio track with quality such as this. My headphones were fully satisfied :P Now i know, why the size is so big.

The story is quite interesting for me. But it's for young audience, isn't it?

I hope the full movie is as great as trailer :)

SpikeVallentine responds:

it's for all audiences!

the full movie will be greater than the trailer, and what?!

what on earth!? the music was good? holy cow. im soo happy. is that true? whattttttt?

WOW! okay...right now.. im going to watch the trailer my self with earphones!

THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Brawl is here!]

Nice

Everything is good, animation is cute, the sound is clear and nice.

I loled heavily beacuse of the ending :D

3/5 Keep up the good work ;)

[The Pen is Mightier...]

Nice concept, however

I wouldn't give this submission 5, beacuse without the second bottom and the message, making such brilliant animation of bullet would be pointless.

I don't mind watching this, but score of this should osscilate somewhere around 4.0-4.10.

Personally I don't get pepole, who are so are soo amazed by this movie. I'm not saying it's not good, bullet and smoke frame by frame animation as well as the color working was perfect, and perfectly synched with the music.

But the music didn't fit the theme i think, at all. Voices were good, anyway.

I'm not intending to lower the score of this movie, but I need to be objective with voting compared to other great animations, so i gave you
3/5 7/10.

Cheers! Keep up the good work and ideas! :)

[War in a lil room]

wow

One month? Dude...

Well it's not like a total crap, there are some sounds used in it, some animation, and sort of enjoyable. But still.. It's too short, and nothing new at all..

1/5, use more potential next time..

[.<3]

Nothing too new or interesting

like the vote desctription of "2".
Really I think that topic isn't so exciting anymore. How much you can watch about love? It's getting really boring..

Music isn't bad, but I don't like emo music at all.

Animation is weak, it's barely acceptable, really. You should put at least more effort in making main characters less cubic. You seem to lack little experience in drawing.

Overally it's not bad, but I don't think that deserves to be on the frontpage.
5/10 2/5

[Valhalla Knights 2]

Nice piece of work

And also, good to see, that you're still alive, Jerry. :)
It's quite a time that passed from the 1-st episode, but I think it was worth to wait a while.

So, animation is very nice, frame-by-frame is very good, I like your chara design. But you don't nesecearly need always to cover the girl's breasts ;). Nature you designed isn't something like one of the Brackenwoods, but still it's nice and eye-friendly. Little suggestion: please, put some more "body action" into movies. (show more than face expression, and a hand, it gets even nicer then)

Sound is pretty good, however you need to volume up the voices, cuz they are sometimes muted by the music.

Finally the storyline. It's very intriguing, you did it very well, but, maybie I'm wrong, still it can be more suprising :D Maybie you should continue the Ken's father plot, and why are that zombie-vikings after the girl. It also would be great if you put more psychological portraits of the main characters.

Overally awersome 9/10 4/5
Keep up the good work :)

PS. What happened to the kissing couple in park, after the zombies attack? I'm curious about that :P

[The Nut Job (part 1)]

Excellent work, however...

Audio quality hurts the overall project, and work negatively for the final vote. I know it's very hard to compile decent audio quality with much of frame-by-frame animation, but you could split your animation into three parts, and it should fit in 10mb filesize.

Also, some preloader would be nice.

I'm not commenting the whole plot, idea and drawings, cuz all of them are excellnt. Also jokes "between the lines" are funny and very well done.

I would give 5/5 whithout a second thought, but the audio quality really dissapointed me. 4/5

I hope that part 2 will fit in size :)

[The One Layer Collab]

Really weak

It's sadly, but i think that "One Layer Flash" is just an excuse to show technically weak, and all the "ZOMFG" and "LOLZORZ" stuff, wich really starts to bore me.

Few of them was nice indeed, but why to put everyone in one layer? Personally it's like a jail for me. Why make work harder and get away the benefits of multi-layer animation? Beacuse of that everything here is very simple and primitive...

Even if you actually hit the frontpage, I still think your work was pointless, kinda pathetic. Kinda nice idea to show the noobs work to the masses..